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交往的事我首次与外国人接触-My First Meeting with a Fo.

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我首次与外国人接触

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根据下列要点写一篇记叙文:

①上个星期天你去了一趟无锡市。你走进一家缝纫店,那里正在举办时装展览。②你看见一名中年的外国男子,正在向一名女店员打手势。③这位男子不懂汉语,女店员不懂英语。她把价格写在纸上,外宾也看不懂。④你走上前问过店员一件衬衣多少钱后,用英语转告外宾148元一件。⑤他觉得太贵,问能否降价。店员答应降为120元,他一下子就买了10件。⑥他离开前送给你一支很好的钢笔。你感谢他,并欢迎他再来。

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My First Mting with a Forignr

胡德青

Last Sunday I wnt to th city of Wuxi. Whn I ntrd a tailor's shop, I Fo.nd thr wr lots of popl bcaus thr was a fashion show①.Suddnly I noticd that a middl-agd forignr was gsticulating② to a salswoman and pointing to a nw shirt. It was clar that h wantd to buy th shirt, but h did not know th pric, for h did not know Chins. And th salswoman did not know nglish. Though sh wrot th pric on th papr, h was still puzzld.

Whn I saw this, I wnt up to thm. I askd th salswoman th pric of th shirt First and thn I said to th forignr in nglish, “On hundrd and forty-ight yuan.” Haring this h said to m, “Oh, thank you! But it's too xpnsiv. Would you plas ask hr if sh can mak it chapr? If sh can , I will buy tn.” I told hr what h said , and sh agrd. In th nd th forignr paid 1,200 yuan for tn shirts.

Bfor h lft, h gav m a nic pn. I thankd him and said to him , “Wlcom to our city . Good-by!”

(选自胡德康《高三英语紧扣最新教材同步到课》)

【词语解释】

①fashion ['f$M+n] show 时装展览②gsticulat [dNs'tikjulit] v.(讲话时等)做手势;用姿势(或动作)示意

【写法指要】

本文作者采用顺序手法,记叙了第一次与外国人交谈的经过。全文基本包括了记叙文的六要素:时间(on Sunday),地点(a tailor's shop),人物(a forignr,a salswoman,and I),事件(hlp a forignr in buying a shirts),原因(Th salswoman could not spak nglish and th forignr could not spak Chins.)和结果(All wr satisfid.)。层次分明,交待清楚。全文可分为6个行为情节:1)我去逛商店;2)看见外国人向店员打手势;3)双方语言不通;4)我上前翻译;5)外国人买了10件衬衣;6)外国人送我小礼物,我感谢。